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FULL VIEW SINCE TEXT IS A LITTLE TINY.

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Something else to keep in mind is the how the text will be viewed once the book is printed. I'd suggest making the speech bubbles a tad bigger (especially in panel 5) so that they can be seen clearly without a magnifying glass :iconwink-plz:
Also, in panel 4, maybe change the position of Fiona's speech bubble by making it lower to help clarify which bubble should be read first. Another thing I noticed is that Ovaltine is spelled correctly here XD I know that you spell it as Obaltine as a way of fictionalizing it to keep buzzards (lawyers) at bay, but for me, this is more of a consistency thing ^^;