Chapter 1 Cover

Wow, you can see how much time you spent on it, and it shows <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> i really like the detail you put into her chair and dresser- and the lighting is very nice. A lot of artists find themselves drawing a picture and finding it more of a learning experience than anything else really. and this might be one of those- but it still comes across as a very well done pic! This looks soo realistic in places- <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> but it is sooooo pink >.<
I think there are just a few places that show that you rushed a little, but that is easily fixed (which i am sure you know where to improve at for that- you dont really need me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
Final note- your shading and use of light is really good!! i would say to look a little into blurring a little, but if you look at your pic and like what you see- then stick with it!

good luck!