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CHAPTER IS REDRAWN HERE: [link]
MUCH BETTER ART!

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The shading on the arms in this page sort of makes it look like her arms were squished with something. I'd say take away the smear of light in the middle of the shadow that makes it look like it's caving in and it'll go back to normal. Some tutorials on hair drawing and coloring would also be beneficial to this, her hair appears very stiff and unmoving especially against the very detailed outfit.